The Improvements we made were:
- Becoming more clear on the storyline
- Deciding on an effective narrative hook
- Discussing how we would go about our story by picking up on the loose parts
- Become clearer to the audience
- The various shot types we would need to use
- What our victim would look like
- Various possible ideas
After putting all our new ideas & improvements, together we came up with 'Step 2' with more complex, more planned ideas and had better thoughts.
We had 3 possible ideas on our storyline that we added to 'Step 2'. We also icluded where and what our establsihing shot was going to be and decided on a more specific time to carry out the filming procedure.
We also decided to carry out extra research on horror films to gain more knowledge/ expertees as horror is our chosen genre.
It look very promising :)
ReplyDeleteIt still seems vague to me. Where are the ideas or plans that show your clearer storyline, your effective narrative hook, various shot types you will use, etc?
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