After hearing some more areas in which we could improve on, we went away and again discussed other ways in which we can improve our ideas and made a start on Step 3.
The Improvements we made were:
- Rethinking over our storyline so we could be more clear on how to make everything piece together
- Show the reason behind his killing
- Why the victims are linked
- Why the victims is in the alleyway
After jotting even more ideas & improvements together on a Step 3 mindmap, we were able to make our narrative much clearer.
We also decided on films to watch and take notes on;
- Scream
- Amusement
- Tormented
- Sorrority Row
'Sorrority Row' is a good example for young adults... liking the 'you're next' in trailer
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