After hearing some more areas in which we could improve in,we then worked on Step 4. Our teacher did however, notice that our step 3 was more looked at and more film-like.
The Improvements we made were:
- Actual decision on everything - story is more clear, 'gaps have now been filled'
- Pieced together the movie as a whole
- Questionnaires on weapon best suited to use and the title of the film
- Narrative hook is effective
After hearing even more positive feedback and now, a few questions on our idea, we went away to start Step 4 which would be our more detailed, planned out, and a more deeper explanation to our film.
We decided that to help us think of what to call our film and what weapon to use, we still looked closely at films like;
- Amusement
- Tormented
- Scream
- I know what you did last summer
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